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Aseem N wrote this at 12:55 pm • Filed under I, Me and Myself •
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“Aaj khidki ke baahar dekhta hoon to wohi station nazar aata hai jahan se meri train kal nikal padi thi. Najaane kis safar ke liye nikal pada tha jo wapas wohi pe aake… aaj tham gaya hoon. Platform pe khadi us masafir ko aaj bhi utni hi kashish se dekhta hoon. Meri train ki taraf do kadam to woh badha deti hai… Mein use awaaz bhi dena chahta hoon… lekin…lekin phir mehsoos hota hai… ki woh to kisi aur hi train ke intezaar mein khadi hai. Aaj mujhe dekh ke woh muskura to deti hai… par phir doosre hi pal alvida bhi keh deti hai. Najaane aise kitne safar kar mein isi station pe kal aane waala hoon… Woh musafir jo aaj station pe khadi, mujhe muskurake dekh rahi hai… Shayad kal kisi aur train mein safar kar rahi ho…”
Its better to regret why you did it, than why you didn’t…So just do it!
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poetry waghera toh mere samajh ki baat nahin…… but thts the spirit just do it. and ur better not postpone for wateveer reasons
Teri hi train us musafir ko manzil tak le jayegi…shayad ye baat us musafir ko pata nahi…
@Neeraj - Nahi yaar… zindagi ke liye koi manzil nahi hoti… bas safar hota hai. Aur har kisi ka yeh hak banta hai ke woh apna safar suhana banane ke liye koi ek humsafar chune :).
Bas ek baar use awaaz do…
so wht r u watiting for ?.. dedo awaaz .. woh zaroor aaegi :)
Hmm..the poem is in style of Gulzar’s Sunset Point… remember it?
Nice one, but the concluding line in English sums it all up!!! Awesome ending to a decent poem. :-)
@Megha - Agar tum dil se bhi awaaz do… toh kabhi kabhi wapas sirf nishabd gunj hi sunayi padti hai…
@Amruta - Bas kalam ne jo likha wohi yahan pe post kar diya… kaisi poem… kaunsi style…!!!